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-Evalyn's Point Of View-
I looked up as the fireworks went off. A smile spread across my face.I could tell that Andy was staring at me. I looked over at him. He put his hand on my cheek and I blushed a little. He then leaned in and pressed his lips against mine. I face was beat red and I was too shocked to kiss back. He parted his lips from mine.
"I'm sorry. I shouldn't of done that." He said and ran off.
"Andy, wait!" I yelled. He just kept running. I said and ran off after him.
-Bridgette's Point Of View-
I was walking towards the bridge when I saw Andy. I ducked down behind a bush so I wouldn't be seen. Andy was the most gorgeous guy i've ever seen. Too bad he was Scout's. he walked up to a shadowy figure. "God, I can't see who he's with, it's too fucking dark." I said to myself.
I looked up as the fireworks started going off. I looked back towards Andy as a firework lit up the whole sky. When I saw who he was with I got really pissed.
"He's with that wannabe, emo, bitch!" I said in anger. All I saw was them talking. Another firework went off and lit up the sky. Next thing I saw was Andy kiss her. This pissed me off to no end. "How does that little freak get someone like him?!" I said.
I watched as Andy ran off and Evalyn tried to follow him. I stood up from behind the bushes and walked over to where they were standing previously.
"Lucky little freak!" I said under my breath. "Wait a second, but Andy's dating-" I whipped out my phone, quickly dialed a number, and waited for someone to pick.
"Hello." Someone tiredly said on the other line. "Who's this?"
"It's me, Bridgette."
"Ugh, Bridgette, I thought I told you never to call me again?!"
"I know, I know, but this is important."
"That's what you said about-"
"Just shut up and listen Scout!" I yelled through the phone. "Either you listen, or you don't find out who I just caught your boyfriend kissing." I had an evil smirk on my face.
"He was what?" She practically yelled through the phone.
"Your boyfriend was all kissy face with the little freak of the town. And by the way he kissed her I'd say he's done with you."
There was silence. "Scout?"
"......Bridgette, I'm gonna need your help." There was silence one more time. "We're gonna make them both hurt." My evil smirk was grew. This was going to be fun.
-Evalyn's Point Of View-
I ran into the crowd of people by the games and rides.
"Andy!" I yelled. "Andy!" I don't know why I bothered yelling. 'Why does he have to be so fast?' I thought. I kept running. I looked all up mainstreet and back on the boardwalk. I turned my head as i was running to look for Andy when I ran into someone and fell flat on my butt. "Ouch! God, i'm so sorry!"
"You seem to fall down a lot." Ashley said with a chuckle.
"Shut up Purdy!" I said getting up off the ground.
"Rawr. Someone's moody." He chuckled again.
"Look Ashley, I'm trying to-"
"Find Andy after he kissed you and ran off?" He smirked. "I saw the whole thing."
"You guys were spying on us?!" I said outraged.  
"No, just me, and I swear I wasn't spying. I turned around for 1 meesly second and I saw him kiss you. The whole time I was just thinking "Yes! Finally!""
"Wait. What do you mean finally?"
"Ummm. Ignore anything I said." I gave him an evil smirk. "C'mon. Do you wanna find Andy or not?" I shook my head and we ran off in search of him.
-Andy's Point Of View-
The cemetary I wondered into had an eery feel to it. Fog rolled across the ground. Spiderwebs moved with the wind. Bats flew above my head. I walked far back into the cemetary until I found a large grave marker I could hide behind. I pulled a ciggarette out of my pocket and lit it. I leaned my head back against the grave marker.
"Why? Why did I kiss her?" I asked myself. "There is no fucking way she likes me the way I like her." I sighed.
I pulled my sleeve up. Little pink scars covered my writsts. "Maybe I should follow my own advice." I whispered to myself. I pulled my sleeve back down and started to cry. This came as a shock to me. I hardly ever cried.
"Awww. And why is Andy Biersack crying?" I looked up to see a blond girl wearing a BVB hoodie.
"It's nothing." I lied.
"It's obviously something. Since when does the lead singer of BVB cry?" The girl asked.
"Please just leave me alone." I finally said.
"Tsk. Whatever you little faggot." The girl said.
"Excuse me?!" I said a little shocked.
"You heard me. You're nothing but a little faggot and devil worshiper just like Evalyn." She pulled off the BVB hoodie and threw it on the ground.
"Wait a second. You're the girl from earlier in DQ."
"That's right." She said with a smirk.
I stood up. "You know, I'm glad Evalyn punched you. You deserve it." I said and began to walk away. "If you're trying to hurt me it's not working." I yelled back at her. I was gonna let her hurt me, i've been hurt enough. I walked out of the cemetary and started heading back towards the fair.
"Andy!" I heard someone yell. I turned around and was attacked with a hugs. I realized that it was Ashley and Evalyn and began to laugh. Evalyn began to blush like crazy and let go. that just made me laugh even more.
"Evalyn, isn't this the part where you're supposed to say, 'Oh Andy, we've been looking for you everywhere!"? Ashley said in a shrilly, peppy girl voice.
"Andy, can I have permission to kill Ashley sometime tonight?" She asked pissed.
"Sure, go ahead." I said still laughing a bit.
"Do you guys wanna haed back to Everette's place? It's not that far away. Right up the street really."
I looked at Ashley and said, "Sure."
-FF-
-Evalyn's Point Of View-
We walked through the door of the apartment and saw that everyone was already here. Jinxx, was standing by the window talking on his phone, CC, Erin and Dylan were sitting on the couch and Jake and Everette were playing Guitar Hero.
"Hey everyone." I said plopping my butt on the couch right next to Erin. Erin grabbed my arm, dragged my butt into our room and locked the door.
"So." She said.
"Sooo?" I said confused.
"How was the kiss?" She said with a smirk.
"W-wait, you?"
"Yes, I saw him kiss you. Now, answer the question, how was it?"
I smile and said, "It was.....amazing."
-Andy's Point Of View-
"So, are you gonna ask her out?" Ashley whispered in my ear.
"Are you crazy Ashley? I've only known her for 2 days."
"Well you already kissed her!" He retaliated.
I sighed. "Look, I wasn't thinking at the time. Plus, I'm dating Scout."
"It's obvious you love this girl Andy. So take another fucking risk! Breakup with Scout and go out with Evalyn. Scout treats you like complete shit anyways."
"Ashley, I-"
"Andrew Dennis Biersack! Either you get in there and ask her out or i'm going to do it for you!" Ashley was standing up and yelling at me now. Everyone in the room was staring at us.
"Wait. Andy wants to ask my sister out?" Eli said. I nodded my head. He smiled and said, "Well go for it dude! I know she likes you too."
I smiled, got up and headed for the room Erin dragged her off to.
-Evalyn's Point Of View-
A knock came from the door and Andy walked in. "Um, sorry Erin, but, do you mind if I talk to Evalyn....alone."
"Oh, um, no. Not at all." She said and walked out the door.
Andy sat on the bed next to me. "What'd you want Andy?" I asked. "Andy, wha-"
"Will you go out with me?" He said under his breath. he spoke so quietly that I couldn't hear him.
"What?" I said confused.
"Look Evalyn, You're sweet, kind, and not to mention beautiful. I love you....and...i was wondering if you'd go out with me?" He said.
This made me blush like mad. "Uh....um..." I was too shocked to say anything. Andy started to get a disappointed look on his face. "Ye- Yes Andy." his face lit up with happiness. Andy leaned in and kissed me again. Cheering could be heard from the door.
We looked up at the door to see everyone standing there cheering at us, everyone but Everett.
-Everett's Point Of View-
When I watched them kiss a pain shot through me. My mind felt numb and my heart, shattered. Unable to stand much more I grabbed my jacket and ran off. Despite it being the middle of summer it was freezing out.
When I came to a huge tree at the park, I leaned against it and sat down. I pulled my knees up to my chest, buried my face in them, and began to cry. My heart was shattered into a million little pieces of glass. Broken, unfixable glass.
"Why Evalyn?" I said to myself. "I woould've thought......you'd known by now.........I would've thought you figured it out....." I pulled my face away from knees and stared at the cresent moon that barely lit the sky. Tears still streaming down my face.
".........I love you Evalyn Monroe."

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Chapter 6!!!! sorry it took so long, I have been extremely busy with school and marching band, plus i just started martial arts.

So, yeah, nothing much to say except I feel bad for Everett in this one. Poor Everett :'(

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~DimitriBelikov Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
Emmmm. ITS GOOD!
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~manga-lover1196 Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!!! :D
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:icondimitribelikov:
~DimitriBelikov Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
Welcome
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~WRITERandPOET Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone wants Bridgette to die...I agree.
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~ZoeyxHeathfan892 Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
BRIDGETTE MUST DIE!! D:<

Poor Everett... :(
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~Rebelangel1997 Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
looks like ashley's being ashley again and poor everett
Bridgette iz going 2 die
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~manga-lover1196 Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
Yes! Bridgette is going to die! >:D
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~Rebelangel1997 Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
bitches gonna get stitches hahahaha.
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~manga-lover1196 Sep 30, 2011  Student Writer
hahahaha
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~Rebelangel1997 Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
please write more. it is an amazing story
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